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Post by dovestar on Jun 13, 2012 19:39:43 GMT -5
[Dovestar] Age: 24 moons Gender: She-cat Rank: Leader Clan: StoneClan Appearance: Dovestar is a gray and white she-cat with leafy green eyes. Her fur is completely white except for her ears,tail,paws and face.Her fur is short. HShe is small,fast,and lean. Her eyes are the color of leaves is new-leaf. Her ears are pointed. Personality: Dovestar is caring,beloved,wise,trustworthy,sometimes dark,strict at times.Caring-Dovestar is very caring to others in her Clan.Beloved-Her Clan looks up to her.Wise-She is the wisest of her Clan,next to the Elders.Trustworthy-She can be trusted with any secret,if you have something you don't want any cat to know besides the highest rank come to her.Dark-Every cat has a dark side,Dovestar can be evil at times.Strict-She can be strict on some of her Clan. History: Dovekit was born to Rosefoot and Stormcloud.Her mother died when Dovekit was 6 moons old. Dovekit became Dovepaw shortly after her mother died.Her mentor was Sunpelt,he taught her everything about the Warrior code.A few moons later,she became Doveflight,the leader Hailstar,chose Doveflight to become deputy.Then moons later,Hailstar died of illness making Doveflight,Dovestar. Read more: thebattlerageson.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=createakitty&action=display&thread=4#ixzz1xilO5kez
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Post by Jungleheart on Jun 18, 2012 9:38:22 GMT -5
Okay.... "Her fur is short" isn't a sentence. Neither is "her ears are pointed." You said her eyes are leafy green twice.... There is a code now. Sorry I didn't do that earlier... For her personality- you kinda just repeated the same thing over and over. How does she feel, how does she think, is there a tom she has a soft spot for? Please be a little more detailed. History- Okay! She is a leader. She needs to have a longer history. And you need to be detailed!!!! Did she have fights? How long has she been leader? I know It seems like a lot to fix, but fix it and you get your leader position!
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Post by Jungleheart on Jun 29, 2012 14:02:55 GMT -5
Don't reply to one i have, dude >.<
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Post by Jungleheart on Jun 29, 2012 14:57:25 GMT -5
You have been inactive, so if you get on again, you will have to be a deputy or warrior.
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