Rusty
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When people ask dumb questions, I feel obligated to give sarcastic answers.
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Post by Rusty on Jun 29, 2012 13:51:48 GMT -5
Snowstar
Age: 45 moons
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Leader
Clan: BlizzardClan
Appearance: Snowstar is an icy blue she-cat. She has electric blue eyes, and a medium sized tail. She has long serrated claws and wickedly sharp teeth. Her pelt is very long and thick, and her paws are medium sized. She is a bought a tail length and a quarter tall and a fox length long. She is about three mouse tails wide.
Personality: Snowstar is a very strong minded she-cat. She will act without thinking sometimes but it helps her in battle. She has a soft voice but can be load when she wants to. She thinks of herself as a pretty good leader but she always wants to get better. When in battle she will give all nine of her lives to protect her clan mates. She will always protect everyone and she tries not to provoke battles where it is not necessary. Snowstar would rather negotiate than battle but when it comes to it she is a very good fighter.
History: Snowstar was born a loner but she soon earned her respect. When she was four moons old she was accepted into Blizzardclan. And when she was 13 moons old she became a warrior. By the time she was 30 moons old she had single handedly fought off two wolves. She stopped an owl from stealing a kit and almost died twice. She became the leader of Blizzardclan when she was 36 moons old and lost two lives by the time she was 40 moons old. She has 7 live left.
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Post by Jungleheart on Jun 29, 2012 14:06:30 GMT -5
You need capilitization and spell check and you will be good.
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Post by Jungleheart on Jun 29, 2012 14:07:49 GMT -5
And you need the right form
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Post by Jungleheart on Jun 29, 2012 14:20:02 GMT -5
Did you copy and paste the form?
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Post by Jungleheart on Jun 29, 2012 14:54:36 GMT -5
Accepted. Next time, try a little more detail, though.
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